“On the back of the yellow paper, in the same pen, she has written her name. Bronwen. Dark and pure. The o is as flawless as a star, as open as a window. I look at it and something in me becomes seven again - I want to crawl into that letter, right into the warm, wanting heart of my mother, before it stopped beating in a jasmine scented bath.”
The author was far far too wordy for me. All these unneccessary flowery prose, I didn’t like it. Maybe some people call it descriptive. But I found it annoying. She described her thoughts as bursting pink and blue bubbles flying behind her as she ran. She described her pregnant belly as a plum, ripe and bursting. Fruity and fleshy. Ugh. Over the top.
It was another book about someone writing a book. I still don’t like that perspective.
The story, once you got into it, was all right. But it took a lot of wordy nothingness and skipping around to present and the story to get to it.
Nothing to write home about.