This entire novel (?) was incoherent and strange.

It was likable enough, but not so much a story as random bits. It was like a blog, kind of, but without any continuity or time line. Some of the pieces were articulated well, but it was hard to really feel anything while reading it because the serious bits were about two paragraphs long and so out of place with the silly rhyming poems and alliterations, that they just came out of left field. Therefor hard to take them all that serious. But I’m pretty sure it wasn’t meant to be taken all that serious.

I have no idea what the point was meant to be, however.  Points for stick figure illustrations, though.